WASHINGTON (AP) — Poet and author Maya Angelou is taking issue with a paraphrased quotation from Martin Luther King Jr. inscribed in his new memorial in Washington, saying the shortened version makes the civil rights leader sound like an “arrogant twit” because it’s out of context.

The words were from a sermon King delivered Feb. 4, 1968, at Atlanta’s Ebenezer Baptist Church, two months before he was assassinated, about a eulogy that could be given when he died.

King said, “Yes, if you want to say that I was a drum major, say that I was a drum major for justice. Say that I was a drum major for peace. I was a drum major for righteousness. And all of the other shallow things will not matter.”

On Tuesday, Angelou, who consulted on the memorial, told The Washington Post that the shortened version of those words sounds egotistical and should be changed.

It reads: “I was a drum major for justice, peace and righteousness.”

The phrase is inscribed on a statue of King without quotation marks because it is paraphrased. It is not grouped with 14 quotations from King that are part of the memorial plaza.

The paraphrased version “minimizes the man,” said the 83-year-old Angelou. “It makes him seem less than the humanitarian he was. It makes him seem an egotist.”

King would have never said of himself that he was a drum major, Angelou said, but rather that others might say that of him.

“He had a humility that comes from deep inside,” Angelou told the Post. “The `if’ clause that is left out is salient. Leaving it out changes the meaning completely.”

Memorial planners said they were fond of the quotation but that it had to be shortened because of a change during the King statute’s creation. They originally planned to use most of the “drum major” quote but changed its placement, and sculptor Lei Yixin told them there wasn’t enough space.

“We sincerely felt passionate that the man’s own eulogy should be expressed on the stone,” said Ed Jackson Jr., executive architect of the memorial. “We said the least we could do was define who he was based on his perception of himself: `I was a drum major for this, this and this.”‘

Project planners outlined the problem and their proposed solution to the U.S. Commission of Fine Arts, which had to approve the memorial’s design. The federal arts panel did not object, Jackson said.

Angelou was one of the memorial’s Council of Historians tasked with selecting the inscriptions for the memorial. But she did not attend meetings about the inscriptions, Jackson said.

Two other memorial advisers were consulted, Jon Onye Lockard and James Chaffers of the University of Michigan. But Jackson said he ultimately had to make the decision.

Lockard told the Post he was fine with the shortened inscription.

“If there’s any comment about anything, it’s late,” he said, noting others also have recently criticized pieces of the memorial.

“I think it’s rather small of folks to pick at things. This has been going on for 14 years, and all of them have had plenty of time to add their thoughts and ideas.”

(Copyright 2011 by The Associated Press. All Rights Reserved.)

Comments (7)
  1. Kim says:

    If it took 14 years to make it happen – then why not take the time to include the actual quote – after all it is what the man said! We are always so quick to accept things as is – it may have taken you 14 years to get to this point, but do we really want a lifetime of struggles to be paraphrased? Just make it happen!

    1. Linda K. Brown says:

      Design by commitee does not work. The monument is majeestic–stop knitpicking.

  2. Tom says:

    Another black yet again not happy, they never are.

    1. Andrea says:

      You’re a assclown. That comment had nothing to do with her being black, that comment was from her as an individual. I do not think it is a big deal being paraphrased, since I am sure his words are located everywhere throughout memorial. She is being too criticial, especially when she was not an active participant.

  3. Clifton says:

    This is easy to fix. Remove the word ‘I’, or change the words ‘I was’ to ‘He was”. You’re welcome.

  4. Tim says:

    I understand what she is saying, but I think the quote is fine. If anything, the statue makes him look arrogant, standing there with his arms folded and that look of disgust on his face. As humble as he was, he would 1) not want the tribute and 2) would definitely not want that pose.

  5. Mad poet says:

    Think of these words as the tweet version of his quote.

    Most minorities can’t read or spell so what’s the difference?

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